Tuesday, September 10, 2013
Week 5: Summary (Runaway Globalization Without Governance)
Globalisation has been too fast for countries to impose international regulations, which has led to more problems than before. Man’s aspirations have brought about an increase in trade and travel but have led to environmental and health issues too. Globalisation has also brought about tariffs, stealing of technology and even plague. Although there have been instances amidst globalisation where countries have co-operated, it did not require much compromise from any country. As the world continues to ‘shrink’, national security becomes increasingly important as the world is more prone to terrorist attacks and even war. However, the pressing concern will be the dangers of nuclear weapons and the consequences of it if abused by man. Lastly, the need to keep up with the world’s rapid growing population has posed a threat to the word’s climate and environment. Furthermore, the United States’ refusal to lead and solve the challenges posed by globalisation has left our world in danger.
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Globalisation has been too fast for countries to impose international regulations, which has led to //more problems than before (rephrase)//. Man’s (What about women??)aspirations ... Globalisation has also brought about tariffs, (^)stealing of technology and even plague. Although there have been instances amidst globalisation where countries have co-operated, it did not require much compromise from any country.-Link- As the world continues to ‘shrink’, national security... However, the pressing concern will be the dangers of nuclear weapons and the consequences //of it if abused by man(Rephrase)//. *Lastly, the need to keep up with the world’s rapid growing population has posed a threat to the word’s climate and environment. *Furthermore, the United States’ refusal to lead and solve the challenges posed by globalisation has left our world in danger.
ReplyDeleteOrganization: You can't use 'lastly' and then 'furthermore'
Mr Gareth, by "Man's aspirations..", I am taking Man as a human individual without reference to sex. Or will it be better if i use "Mankind's aspirations"?
DeleteYes, or people's or The human race's
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