After attending 10 weeks of ES1102 classes, I have learned more about the basic foundation of English which has helped to improve my writing. In my recent essay writing on globalisation, improvements can be seen in my essay’s organisation as compared to the organisation of my reader response.
Before the start of the semester, ideas in my essay are disorganised and often confuse markers reading it. However, after learning how an essay should be developed using a problem-solution organisational pattern, I believe that my globalisation essay writing is clear and easy to understand. Although this simple method makes my essay seems systematic and dull, it is always better than an essay that is difficult to understand.
Writing an essay is never easy. Thus, constantly and religiously writing essays is the only way to improve my current writing skill.
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Very accurately written apart from the first line of the second paragraph. Which tense should it be in. My main issue is the number of times you've used the word "essay(s)'
ReplyDeleteWith regard to the content, what are you going to do with your essays after you've written them?
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